Greetings from the Critique Club.
Hmm, don't know what to make of this one... It fits the challenge, and it's clearly been carefully composed - you've got that nice diagonal of trees fading off into the distance. But something about it just doesn't quite come together... Maybe it's the lack of a clear subject, leaving the viewer's eye to drift backwards and forwards without being drawn to any one single item. Maybe it's the mood of the colours - the normally happy greens and yellows somehow acquire a slightly morose feel mixed in with the darkness above and the subject matter. Overall, the viewer is left with the impression that the artist was indeed trying to say something, but also ends up slightly frustrated with the unspecificity of the message.
Not a bad shot though, and you've got some interesting stuff in your portfolio - I look forward to seeing further entries from you :) |