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Photo of a Drawing of a Camera
Photo of a Drawing of a Camera
tpbremer


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Challenge: Crayons & Colored Pencils (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D80
Lens: Nikon AF Micro-Nikkor 60mm f2.8D
Location: Room 244 EHS
Date: Apr 9, 2009
Aperture: f/11
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/4
Date Uploaded: Apr 12, 2009

Just a simple idea. Tried to use a little motion blur to make it seem like the photo is taking during the act of sketching.
Standard Processing.

Statistics
Place: 70 out of 110
Avg (all users): 5.1392
Avg (commenters): 5.2500
Avg (participants): 4.7917
Avg (non-participants): 5.2909
Views since voting: 750
Views during voting: 324
Votes: 158
Comments: 11
Favorites: 0


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04/23/2009 02:40:16 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Initial impression: Made me smile with the hand drawing the camera and a picture being taken of the hand drawing the camera.

Technical: Like the execution here; the lighting is good, composition is made more interesting by the angles of the paper and the hand.

Artistic: I like the blurred hand, because I feel the pic would have looked too static otherwise. The orange of the pencil helps offset the blue of the camera body. There does seem to be a lot of white space at the lower right, though.

FWIW: I probably would have cropped in a bit more, or have the drawing closer to the spine of the sketchbook. In voting, I would give this a 6.

Feel free to PM me with any questions,

Susan
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/19/2009 03:20:25 AM
love the motion.
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04/17/2009 12:51:14 PM
neat
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04/15/2009 01:06:23 PM
the motion-blurred hand is too distracting. i would have kept a more static pose...or at least held the bottom two fingers still while moving the pencil back and forth
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04/15/2009 08:34:31 AM
Nice shot.
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04/15/2009 04:26:55 AM
i like how you captured the movement, very 1910s italian futurist.
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04/14/2009 10:42:20 AM
man wish I could draw...you have a good idea and I like the hand motion it give you a feel that you are just madly drawing away...
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04/14/2009 10:25:47 AM
Not a bad shot. I like the binding at the bottom left. I actually wish the hand was not blurred.
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04/13/2009 05:22:10 PM
The image meets the subject matter effectively. A sound demonstration of the creative process in meeting the challenge in a very unusual way. A couple of minor detail problems as the image appears to be less than sharp as it should be - perhaps a higher shutter speed or a time lapse of the hand drawing would have been better. A good solid entry into the challenge.
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04/13/2009 12:44:11 PM
nice action. might have been a bit more appealing without the brown space above and to the right of the hand. it distracts from the pristine feel of the paper
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04/13/2009 08:49:41 AM
Could have used a better title.
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