Sorry, but I have to leave a fairly low vote on this one. The image itself is soft and a bit on the busy side to me. The first thing that jumped out, however was that your text is not straight.
A busy image and not very well focused - it's really a DOF problem. The font and color are difficult to read. this might have worked better if taken in large format .jpg or RAW and cropped to center on the birds.
I'm not sure why you included the element on the right, but it is distracting without giving me much of a clue as to location. also the OOF twig on the right doesn't help. Challenges like this are tough when you don't live near a major tourist attraction, but A bit more thoughful framing would help.
I like the caption and the concept but it wasnt delivered that well for me. The picture is overexposed with purple fringe and the red doesnt go well. The text is also a little tilted.
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