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A Lazy Sunday Afternoon
A Lazy Sunday Afternoon
expatdawn


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Fauna III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Location: Richmond Park
Date: Mar 29, 2009
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/250
Galleries: Animals, Birds
Date Uploaded: Mar 29, 2009

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Place: 128 out of 204
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Avg (commenters): 6.1111
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Views since voting: 932
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Votes: 199
Comments: 10
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04/09/2009 07:18:06 AM
Hi Dawn, I read your post in the scores thread. First of all congrats on a nice finish in your first challenge. a plus 5 score first time out is pretty good!

What they are talking about with the curves adjustments is, in lightroom on the right side when in "develop" mode. It is called "tone curve" and allows you to bring the highlights out a bit more and make the shadows a bit darker. this will give your photo more "snap" to it and make the deer pop off the page better. I also agree with the idea of cropping it to make it a horizontal shot because of all the extra space at top and bottom which do not really add to the photo.

Here are a couple of quick edits I did to demonstrate what was mentioned. I hope it helps. Take care and good luck in future challenges.

Ernie



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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/05/2009 10:50:39 AM
Interesting perch!
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04/04/2009 03:15:59 AM
What a rack! And I've never seen birds hang out like that.
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04/03/2009 11:23:03 AM
You could fix levels and a bit different crop maybe.
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04/03/2009 10:16:57 AM
charming picture (could be enhanced using a levels or curves adjustment)
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04/02/2009 11:49:55 PM
Your photo needs some cropping top and bottom, maybe it should have been shot landscape instead of portrait.
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04/02/2009 10:37:42 PM
i think i tighter crop could make the deer pop out more
nice capture though!
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04/02/2009 08:53:14 PM
A nice candid,although I would like to see a closer crop of the bottom - that's a DOF problem. Other than that, it's great.
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04/02/2009 08:12:49 AM
Very interesting photo. Your models could not have posed much better for you, but then again, you are the one who had to catch them in their perfect position.
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04/01/2009 06:52:02 PM
Nice composition with the deer behind's head between the other's antlers.
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