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Challenge: Language (Basic Editing)
Collection: Challenges
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED
Location: Southeastern LA University Library
Date: Mar 18, 2009
Aperture: 3.8
ISO: 360
Shutter: 1/45
Date Uploaded: Mar 21, 2009

 I only put this one in because I took a bit of time at the school library trying to learn how to take good indoor shot's and didn't want it to not be seen...haha. I tested the water's with a couple of DPCer's on the subject matter and they assisted me quite nicely about my composition and idea's. Thanks to vawendy & Bebe for your critiques! If there critiques fall in line with the average DPCer then this image should fall within the 5 point range. We will see!


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Place: 71 out of 116
Avg (all users): 4.9854
Avg (commenters): 4.7500
Avg (participants): 4.6585
Avg (non-participants): 5.0667
Views since voting: 673
Views during voting: 317
Votes: 206
Comments: 4
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/31/2009 10:49:52 PM
I think the first slang book needed to be in focus, as it is larger and more interesting. Then the others could have faded off. At the moment, the eyes are drawn to the out of focus green book also becase of the light reflection off the writing
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 03/25/2009 03:00:43 PM
If this is the main focus of the picture, why are the words out of focus?
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 03/25/2009 12:33:14 AM
Focus might have been better on the "A dictionary of SLANG" since that's the first thing that caught my eye.
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 03/25/2009 12:12:38 AM
I like the shadows
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