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My One Second Slice Of Time
My One Second Slice Of Time
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Challenge: 1-Second Exposure (Advanced Editing VII*)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Lens: Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Location: Home
Date: Mar 21, 2009
Aperture: f/3.5
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1 sec
Date Uploaded: Mar 20, 2009

Crop
Auto Color
Duplicate Layer
Convert layer to BW and 50% opacity
Used eraser tool on clock to bring color back
Flatten image
Noise Ninja
Sharpen
Resized
Added boarder
Save for web

Statistics
Place: 88 out of 132
Avg (all users): 5.1000
Avg (commenters): 6.5000
Avg (participants): 4.8065
Avg (non-participants): 5.2422
Views since voting: 771
Views during voting: 375
Votes: 190
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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04/01/2009 08:10:31 PM
This is Kari Ann, greetings from the Critique Club:

composition: good choice of not setting the subject right smack in the middle, for this isnt a very strong subject in the first place.

color:the grey wall dosent accent the clock very well, but im sure that this was all you had to work with

contrast: contrast is good on the clock, but the wall is very monotonous.

focus: good focus

depth of field:not any to speak of here

lighting: strange lighting...i'll explain more in a second

other: The way you processed this image is very strange. The clock seems to be that of a computer graphic (though i know its not) I think mostly due to the fact that the wall is so flat and the clock is so vibrant. while this picture properly conveys the act of one second, its not very original, thus the lower scoring from voters. I do like, however, the second hand not being blurred, thats something that sets this picture off. All in all, a good shot that needed a little somethign more to push it over the edge. Keep up with the work, and I definatly look forward to whatever else you put out here on DPC! If you have any other questions or comments, feel free to PM me anytime.
-Kari ann Haskell
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/27/2009 06:31:31 AM
While technically very well executed it remains (for me) a very flat image. 6
Border does not improve IMO Good Luck
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03/25/2009 08:36:30 PM
Thats pretty cool to capture the second hand like that, not the most interesting composition though.
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03/24/2009 11:58:31 PM
Excellent take on this challenge, and an attractive, well composed shoy.
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03/24/2009 04:39:38 PM
good clear shot without blur.
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03/24/2009 07:24:58 AM
Interesting choice of crop and BG color.
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03/23/2009 07:20:01 PM
Excellent timing ;)
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