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10/02/2013 11:03:14 PM |
here are my critiques on this...you jars have to be perfectly aligned (use a ruler). Labels must be straight and dead on. In your processing your white must be "white" (use the eyedropper in levels). Try to "overexpose" to make it high key. Are you able to bend the white background (poster board) so that it is under your candles thus making a seamless BG. Or you could use a mirror with a white (ironed) sheet again making the BG seamless. |
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03/20/2009 03:04:41 PM |
a selective desaturation that seems to actually serve a purpose. good work. |
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03/18/2009 08:15:45 PM |
underexposed image, and an overexposed subject. (even though my sister is a survivor I am really tired of seeing breast cancer stuff. it is so overdone. A great cause to be sure, but now more of a commercial enterprise. Did you know that there is more money donated to breast cancer alone then all male specific illnesses combined?)
it is in good focus though so I will give it a 5. |
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03/17/2009 09:28:48 PM |
Great lighting nice color |
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03/17/2009 04:41:06 PM |
very good idea...what if you had taken off the lids and lit them? |
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03/17/2009 07:36:47 AM |
the horizon is a little wonky, very simple composition, it works. |
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03/16/2009 11:32:09 AM |
the living for hope glass in a littel turned to the right more than the surviving hope glass. but i like the shot. |
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03/16/2009 11:18:20 AM |
I absolutly Love this but the "living Hope" one is like crooked... |
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03/16/2009 10:54:46 AM |
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