I like the concept of covering half of her face, adds mystery/intrigue. I like the tie in of the fan and the earring. I also like how the earring fills in the dark area. Nice work.
Very pretty! The only thing I would have changed is maybe making her make-up a little more dramatic for this. Imo I like to see striking colors on model for close up shots. I still really like it and it was well composed and taken and the earring as piano keys was a nice touch!
Excellent composition, great lighting, beautiful girl, one suggestion: I believe this wonderful image would have been even more powerful should she have worn a musical note shaped ear ring.