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sempermarine


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Grey (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Lens: Canon EF-S 60mm f/2.8 Macro USM
Date: Feb 1, 2009
Aperture: 14
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/250
Galleries: Abstract, Textures
Date Uploaded: Feb 1, 2009

My original idea was to take some shots of attacking seagulls but I thought this would be safer. Besides I always admire the work of [user]IreneM[/user] and this was a good opportunity to try some of those brilliant water shots, It's harder than it looks. A big thanks to my wife for helping out on this shot. I'll be happy if [user]IreneM[/user] gives me a nice comment and/or I get above my average.

Statistics
Place: 94 out of 184
Avg (all users): 5.1846
Avg (commenters): 8.5000
Avg (participants): 4.5283
Avg (non-participants): 5.6364
Views since voting: 914
Views during voting: 242
Votes: 130
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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02/09/2009 07:17:42 AM
Originally posted by Bear_Music:

Originally posted by sempermarine:

I'm actually disappointed with the score. Oh well.

If you gave me a 3,2, or 1 I'd be very interested in knowing why and how I can improve in your eyes. Thanks


I didn't vote this challenge, but to answer your question: Image is seriously oversharpened (see the halo around the bulb?): it looks like this may have been the best of your many attempts but it wasn't as sharp as you'd have liked it, so you gave it a heavy dosing of USM.

Another thing would be backlash against liquid-drop shots, which I believe we're starting to see. To score really well, it seems to me, they need a sense of luminosity which this one, unfortunately, is lacking.

Finally, this may just be me, but the border here is doing you no favors at all, it's sort of clumsy/chunky. If the inline were only 1 pixel, that would help a lot.


Bear,

Thanks for the comments. I appreciate you taking the time. I know you didn't vote, but if you did and gave me a 1, 2, or 3 I could live with it based on your comments. Now back to the drawing board.
02/09/2009 03:24:22 AM
Originally posted by sempermarine:

I'm actually disappointed with the score. Oh well.

If you gave me a 3,2, or 1 I'd be very interested in knowing why and how I can improve in your eyes. Thanks


I didn't vote this challenge, but to answer your question: Image is seriously oversharpened (see the halo around the bulb?): it looks like this may have been the best of your many attempts but it wasn't as sharp as you'd have liked it, so you gave it a heavy dosing of USM.

Another thing would be backlash against liquid-drop shots, which I believe we're starting to see. To score really well, it seems to me, they need a sense of luminosity which this one, unfortunately, is lacking.

Finally, this may just be me, but the border here is doing you no favors at all, it's sort of clumsy/chunky. If the inline were only 1 pixel, that would help a lot.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/09/2009 12:05:02 AM
If anyone really cares I mixed gray acrylic paint in the water and dropped it into a shallow pan. I'm actually disappointed with the score. Oh well.

If you gave me a 3,2, or 1 I'd be very interested in knowing why and how I can improve in your eyes. Thanks

Message edited by author 2009-02-09 00:06:43.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/03/2009 09:43:55 PM
I find the bright edges on the droplet really distracting.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/03/2009 08:51:42 PM
Very nice-- I especially like the reflection
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/03/2009 03:50:47 AM
If this is not IreneM kitchen work, it's her style of drop shots.
Absolutely amazing... 10 for sure
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/02/2009 01:26:14 PM
Awesome! A beautiful study in grey.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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