Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 3
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 8
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
The motion blur is interesting but the overall graininess of the image and the predominant red tone takes away from the shot.
The red lighting is a decent part of this picture, but it is unfortunate that the long exposure (or however you got the ghost effect) kind of diminishes the impact. it's very difficult to determine what's going on. indeed there seems to be too much. neatimage would reduce the amount of noise in the picture (the kind of speckly effect) and it might have improved if you opted to focus more on the girl or the lad on the left...
I like the creativity of this one. If it was not so dark and the boy on the outside was more in focus but that might of been out of your control. You might play around with this in B&W. Nice job!
This is more a particular style that appeals to some and not to others. I wouldnt know where to begin to try and critique it as it is not really a style I am familiar with or particularly care for. Good luck in the challenge!
I gave this a five. I wanted to score higher because I generally like this type of image. Unfortunately, it was just too blurred and double exposed looking. There should have been one 'solid' subject to focus on.