Composition: I really like this angle. I am not fond of the arm there... assuming you are holding the cam? :)
Lighting/Exposure: Catchlights are nice. The light is harsh on the top of your head though.
Pose: I never really go for a shot where both eyes are on an even line. I like to see just a bit of a head tilt.
Suggestions for Improvements: Room between you and the wall behind you. A shot at f4 or f3.5 would have helped the composition, methinks. Perhaps a bit of diffusion for that light :)
A very nice first portrait for this SC. I am feeling like you are a little angry with the expression :) |