The shot idea is good, but those hanging stars are distracting to me. It's very difficult to light evenly with natural light, thus might try an ND filter if you can. I cannot see that sweet childs face and they look to be having fun!!:) A lower angle would give you a subtle view of the stars and a better view of the outdoor activity.
I like the fun scene you tried to capture through the window, I'm afraid it does not work for me though. The elements of the foreground seem to interfere with viewing the scene beyond, rather than enhancing and framing it.
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