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12/24/2008 01:45:05 AM |
| I agree with what Carl has said below. Rather than focusing too much on creating a bokeh, you should have tried to have a bokeh that would have enhanced the subject |
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12/19/2008 06:01:51 PM |
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12/19/2008 08:02:10 AM |
| Maybe you should have tried a background bukeh that enhanced the picture better. It is hard to see how the lights enhance the cigarette scene. |
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12/19/2008 03:19:41 AM |
| Your idea might need a little bit of tweaking... I do find your focus a bit off and the entire image is just a hair too dark. Your lights in the bg are pretty but they don't really enhance the image I feel you are trying to portray. Perhaps a great iced glass of scotch or whiskey as the bokeh would have complimented it more... maybe just a table with empty chairs. I just don't feel like the lights were the right choice here. I hope this helps some :) Good luck! |
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12/17/2008 11:51:39 AM |
| i really like it, but next time you should use more light and colors! |
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12/17/2008 12:27:27 AM |
| The background is great but you've lost a lot of detail in the foreground. |
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