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Tiny Dancer
Tiny Dancer
tpbremer


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Bokeh V (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D80
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.8
Location: Living Room
Date: Dec 16, 2008
Aperture: f/2.5
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/8
Date Uploaded: Dec 16, 2008

Got this idea when setting up the tree. I think it needs work... I thought maybe a self portrait reflected in a globe ornament w/ the bg bokeh would look good too, but I ran out of time.


Statistics
Place: 107 out of 216
Avg (all users): 5.2576
Avg (commenters): 5.3333
Avg (participants): 5.1081
Avg (non-participants): 5.3468
Views since voting: 579
Views during voting: 327
Votes: 198
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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12/26/2008 02:40:41 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club...

I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 6.

My first impression is that the bokeh is awesome. My guess would be those are lights on a christmas tree. Their colourfullness and interesting shapes make the background just awesome. I like the relfections in the glass, but find the feathers a little awkward. I would love to see this without the feathers, but then again, she might not be wearing anything under there..lol. I'd love to see some alternates with different ornaments. My only real criticism would be the crop, as it does not look deliberate as her hand and feet are just slightly cut off.

If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/22/2008 05:03:22 AM
Cool shot..
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12/21/2008 10:38:05 PM
I like this photo but the crop cut some parts of the dancer and the bokeh is good but not really creamy. Great colors!
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12/19/2008 05:58:10 PM
ong love it
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12/19/2008 03:02:36 PM
the sharp polygons are really distracting to the image
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12/19/2008 07:56:50 AM
For me the crop is too tight on all 4 sides. Nice background though.

What are those 2 spots in front of the subject.
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12/18/2008 02:05:34 AM
Very nicely crafted picture!
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12/17/2008 08:00:42 AM
Fascinating use of bokeh, only wish you hadn't cropped the feet and hand.. that makes this a 10 knocked down to a 9 :(
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