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12/29/2008 01:18:36 PM |
**Critique Club Comment**
Well the white balance and the somewhat harsh lighting I don't need to comment on too much. I think the main thing that I could see to improve this would be the actual personification. You chose a great object - I can definitely see how this would seem to be a person - but putting it in this particular situation doesn't really work that great for me. I don't feel emotionally engaged by the idea of what the object is going through. What might work better for me is to keep the ascending pose but add some more elements to the scene so that the object could be interacting with or reacting to them. |
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12/20/2008 04:22:03 PM |
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12/19/2008 09:22:47 PM |
| Good composition but the lighting could be better IMHO. |
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12/19/2008 09:09:49 PM |
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12/17/2008 01:51:57 PM |
| i am not sure i see paranoid...but i get the idea |
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12/17/2008 11:21:34 AM |
| it seem like your WB is off. Camera got fooled by too much yellow? |
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