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Challenge: Bokeh V (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Location: israel
Date: Dec 11, 2008
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/1000
Galleries: Fashion
Date Uploaded: Dec 11, 2008

is name bortukan

Statistics
Place: 208 out of 216
Avg (all users): 3.7727
Avg (commenters): 3.4444
Avg (participants): 3.5942
Avg (non-participants): 3.8682
Views since voting: 761
Views during voting: 304
Votes: 198
Comments: 9
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12/20/2008 07:55:13 PM
interesting shot but no visible bokeh...
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12/20/2008 06:27:34 PM
I don't see any bokeh here.
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12/19/2008 06:39:58 PM
good shot
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12/19/2008 09:53:20 AM
Great photo! Nice colors and light.
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12/19/2008 08:58:08 AM
The background is too dark and i would like to see her face...The light is very pleasing though.
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12/18/2008 06:37:48 PM
Your lighting in this is really pretty. The bokeh does not lend itself to this photo. It is so dark that it almost disappears completely. Your model is not looking at the camera and because this is such a tight shot, it loses interest as we have no idea why you chose to capture her at this particular moment. If you had shot a little wider, perhaps we would see whatever she may be looking at as well.
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12/18/2008 10:08:33 AM
Might be my monitor, but I can't make out any detail in the background.
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12/17/2008 09:37:30 AM
First of all...where is the bokeh?

Secondly...why are you trying to make me care for the back side of someones head? I can care less for the curly hair. Hair has no emotional impact, no matter how you try.

The crop is off as well.

The only good thing in this image is the dof, the rim light off the face which I would of wanted to see more for the emotional value, and the key light kicking off the shoulder.

Not going to do so well in this challenge, especially on this web site.

Good luck, happy holidays.
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12/17/2008 09:14:51 AM
Not sure what the point of this photo was (not meant in a bad way). Your subject is looking away from teh camera, so all you see is the back of his/her head. You don't really show what they are looking at either.
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