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Mother to Daughter
Mother to Daughter
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Before and After II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D80
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX NIKKOR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED VR II
Location: Vigan Ilocos Norte, Philippines
Date: Dec 7, 2008
Aperture: f/6.3
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/50s
Galleries: Family, Photojournalism
Date Uploaded: Dec 9, 2008

 Just a different take on the subject. I chose this photo of a Mother(before) and her daughter (after) to symbolize before and after as the past and the future. As adults we all learned from our mistakes, and as parents we all wish that our children won't commit those mistakes and one way for them to avoid it is to instill in them the lessons of the past.

PP: raw conversion, cropping and shadow/highlight adjustment

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Place: 55 out of 143
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Views during voting: 340
Votes: 186
Comments: 9
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 12/22/2008 09:23:38 PM
Greetings from the critique club...

This is a very personal photo as we can see the interactions of the mother and the daughter. I like the choice of black & white, as it allows us to focus on the subjects emotions. I also like the contrast in dark & light clother between the two main subjects.

The crop seems a little awkward as the daughters shoe is just barely touching the bottom of the photograph, and doesn't appear deliberate. I quite like the blown out hightlights in the background, but at this point they are competing for attention. Perhaps a tighter crop would aleviate the problem.

If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/16/2008 08:25:12 AM
Lovely candid photo - little girl is cute and Mum looking on just adds strength to the shot. Well done.
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 12/15/2008 09:09:01 PM
nice shot, but take care with the white balance.
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 12/15/2008 04:31:58 AM
Nice capture. Feel it could do with a little (more) sharpening, and perhaps a little more contrast, IMHO. 6.
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 12/14/2008 02:47:10 PM
Lovely picture
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 12/13/2008 10:19:29 AM
nice shot, well done, love the mood 7
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 12/12/2008 12:03:51 PM
Might have liked this better with a closer crop.
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 12/11/2008 01:38:38 AM
You've captured a nice moment between mother and daughter. I like the B&W conversion. The one thing that stick out clearly is the fact it's crooked. I think if you straighten it, you may cut off a foot though.
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 12/10/2008 08:12:51 AM
Beautiful. I would have loved it more if I could see more of the details of the child's face.
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