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12/23/2008 08:37:10 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 6.
I think you did a great job considering it wasn't packing snow. You must have magic hands. My first constructive criticism would be that since this photo was taken for a "before & after" challenge, it might make a little more sense to have the full snowman on the left, and the melted snowman on the right, as we generally read from left to right. I love the contrast of the white snow people against the black background. This image might benefit from a little more brightness overall, as the details for the melted snowman are a little difficult to see. My last comment would be that the reflection of the full snow man is a little distracting because it is almost a whole reflection, but not quite. I would either crop the image so that only a small portion of the reflection shows, or crop it so that the entire reflection shows. I think that would strengthen the photo a little bit more. Overall, very comical shot.
If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you. |
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12/16/2008 11:10:29 PM |
| Great idea - I like the photo! |
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12/16/2008 08:47:32 AM |
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12/13/2008 08:23:45 PM |
| Funny idea, lacking in detail, otherwise would be good |
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12/13/2008 05:19:08 PM |
| neat idea, definitely executed better than the other snowman pictures |
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12/13/2008 06:56:19 AM |
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12/12/2008 07:58:12 PM |
| I like your low key lighting thats directional. What I don't like is that fact you cut off the reflections head. I think the full reflection would frame this shot better. |
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12/12/2008 12:48:44 PM |
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12/12/2008 12:00:01 PM |
| Goodness! Don't get on Frosty's bad side! I like this, it meets the challenge well. Would have liked a little more light. Perhaps a flaming match (or at least a burnt one) instead of an unlit one. |
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12/12/2008 08:38:50 AM |
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12/11/2008 09:14:56 AM |
| Is that a match? Did Frosty commit "snowocide"?????? |
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12/10/2008 02:09:56 AM |
| I wish there were just a little more light on the right side... Otherwise, really clever. |
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12/10/2008 12:30:10 AM |
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