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12/23/2008 08:41:41 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 6.
In regards to this challenge, you created a photograph that is very easy to understand. Well done. I love that the image is balanced, and the white background was a good choice. I like that you chose side lighting to give the photo a dramatic effect, but it is a little bright on the left hand side of the pineapple. The can is also a little dark. I realize you were trying not to get reflections on the can. Perhaps this would be a good time to try bouncing the light back in with a reflector.
If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you. |
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12/17/2008 08:05:10 PM |
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12/16/2008 11:57:52 PM |
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12/16/2008 08:45:10 AM |
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12/15/2008 12:00:20 PM |
| Lighting is quite bright on the left of the pineapple, otherwise a very nice shot. |
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12/13/2008 08:17:54 PM |
| Simple, to the point! Good |
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12/12/2008 12:59:01 PM |
| great shot, love the light coming from the bottem lefthand side 8 |
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12/12/2008 10:33:47 AM |
| Good subject choice! I even like the simple setup. My only complaint is the lighting. Not enough on the right/front and too harsh on the left. |
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12/10/2008 06:03:14 PM |
| maybe just try to reduce the shadows |
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12/10/2008 09:48:37 AM |
| Light seems too harsh on the left. |
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12/10/2008 03:02:34 AM |
| Both subjects on the same plane makes this weaker than it could be. The side lighting is a great idea, but a bit too harsh on the left, leaving the can too dark and flat. |
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