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Challenge: Before and After II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF 100mm f/2.8 Macro
Location: Cambridge,UK
Date: Dec 7, 2008
Aperture: f/5.6
ISO: 100
Shutter: 0.8s
Galleries: Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Dec 8, 2008

I have peeled the orange, put it in the plate, put some orange juice in it and then clicked few photos.

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Place: 81 out of 143
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Avg (commenters): 6.0000
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Votes: 186
Comments: 12
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12/22/2008 10:03:03 PM
Greetings from the critique club...

I like the approach you have taken with you photograph. Instead of just placing 2 objects side by side, you have combined them to create an interesting photograph. Bonus points for you!

I like the abstract nature of this photograph. A square crop might work better here if you cropped off the left side of the photograph. As it stands right now, the curve of the bowl leads the viewers eye away from the center. There are plenty of plate photographs on this site with a square crop. Browse around to see what I am talking about. The crop is also a little awkward as the oranges are cropped in a manner that does not look deliberate. I would prefer to see them not cropped at all.

If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/16/2008 08:04:07 PM
Great idea- well done.
12/16/2008 09:02:32 AM
Nice shot, but I don't think the title suits the challenge (even if the orange looks like a lily).

Good effort though! Crisp and clear!
12/13/2008 08:41:02 PM
I think I understand the picture, and I like it, lovely colour, but I think a different title would be appropriate.
12/12/2008 11:19:11 AM
Very creative way to show orange juice! Nicely done! The white plate on black background works well too.
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12/11/2008 02:05:20 PM
love it!!! 7
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12/11/2008 10:22:34 AM
wheres the before and where the after??!!??
12/11/2008 01:06:10 AM
it's hard to imagine the liquid is orange juice
12/10/2008 07:50:21 PM
Great idea and subject. Good lighting. I wish the bowl was position a little more to the left, leaving some more black in the frame.
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12/10/2008 06:59:03 PM
Is this supposed to be orange juice. Why is it in a bowl?
12/10/2008 09:26:22 AM
An original presentation of orange and juice :-)
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12/10/2008 02:39:01 AM
Most creative of the OJ shots. I'm not sure the out-of-frame helps though.
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