i find this viewpoint disorientating in a bad way. Looks like you cropped off a lot of this which I think hinders the impact. Also, the pillar at the top-right corner does a good job of wasting space and blocks the eye from following the leading lines in the roof so you can't see the end properly. Still, the exposure is cool and you did a good job of keeping the bright windows in check.
Interesting photo. The tilting seems a little wierd to me. I wonder if the straight lines will effect your score downward since the challenge is: "Capture an image that includes only curves, twists or other non-straight lines."