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11/26/2008 01:17:19 AM |
I think the anticipation is good in this like  bobonacus said, but they seem to be off in the middle of nowhere, without the puck for a reference point or anything, or like  karmat said, change the framing in order to guide the viewer towards what is happening. |
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11/19/2008 02:30:03 PM |
| Even without editing, I think this has the potential to be a good shot. A boost in levels/contrast, or brightened a bit will really help. Then, a tighter crop on the left to force the eyes to anticipate what is coming in the frame from the right helps to build the action. |
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11/06/2008 09:47:46 PM |
| Never and I mean Never show your work without an edit............even to your peers! Always show your best work. |
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11/02/2008 07:27:25 PM |
looks a little dark to me, a little shadow / highlights and levels really brings the photo out more in only a minutes work. If you didn't already you could shoot in raw to be able to recover the shadows and keep the quality.
I like the position of the players, there is great anticipation in this shot |
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