Wow! Thanks a lot for this poem and the picture! It's at all a great idea and very well done! The onliest thing, I'd criticise, if I'd be asked is that the poem isn't that good readable at the lower left side! However- 9 - KAOS
Its a nice idea, but the glass distortion seems to have no connection with the words. Maybe using a quote about vision or something would bring it together better.
Why is the glass tilted? The flowers in the background add to this and keep it from just being sentimental. The sentimental adds to it. Clear and crisp