IMHO it is not recommendable to present an image out of focus. When having such an obvious basic problem, you can only expect comments on that, and we miss the rest of your content.
Pretty cool light source. I also like the red glow on the childs face. Exclenet angle and framing/cropping. The blurr in the hand is a little distracting however, the rest of the focus seems ok for the lighting conditions. Nice shot. Good luck in the challenge. ~Hbunch7187~