This shot really ain't bad at all, I actually gave you a 6. It is a very good shot, nicely composed. As the DOF is very shallow , your point of focus needs to be crisper , but this is difficult to achieve given you choice of subject and color tones.
beautiful. the white is a little too much for me, but it isnt too bad. i love the detail in the hand though, the little fingernails and wahtnot. great job