I like the way you brought the title into the shot here with her waistband. Very creative thinking. Only 3 things bug me about this shot. One, is her feet being cut off at the ankles, it makes her look like an amputee. Second, is she has no PJ bottoms on. Third, your colour is a little too warm (yellow) on her skin. So, shoot wide and include the feet (remember not to ever crop at a joint), add bottoms and just pull them down a bit to show the waistband (sometimes implications are more interesting), and try this setting in Photoshop to correct the colour: New layer>colour balance and put this in the boxes on the right: -24, 6, 24 |