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09/16/2008 09:06:33 PM |
nice and sharp image - an just a slight bit risqué but in a good way
the image seems to be more about focus than shallow DOF |
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09/15/2008 10:08:22 PM |
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09/14/2008 07:10:40 PM |
| I have to wonder what you were thinking here. This looks like a bad porn shot with bad lighting. |
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09/12/2008 05:30:08 PM |
I don't see anythig about shallow DOF.
A cool image though. |
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09/11/2008 11:06:56 PM |
| Really now? Not sure this meets the requirements of Shallow DOF. |
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09/11/2008 09:19:43 AM |
| My first thought is that too much of this is in focus for a shallow DOF challenge. You may have shot with a fairly wide aperture but the result doesn't look like shallow DOF to me. Also the light is a bit harsh with that shadow on her face. Some fill light there would help a lot. |
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09/11/2008 12:26:14 AM |
| Hmmm... ok, um, red is good. The light could probably be better. The source coming from the right is a bit harsh is all. Not sure I like this point of view either, why am I looking up? Feel like I'm sitting on the floor, kinda awkward. Would also be much more engaging if the model was looking directly into the lens, and, as a minor nitpick, the fan she's holding is back-to-front. Hope this helps, good luck :) |
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09/10/2008 10:52:52 PM |
| HOT! But I would say poor lighting. You can see where that lighting is coming from which makes her coloring look off, and unbalanced. Also I think that the positoning could be better. |
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09/10/2008 10:50:06 PM |
| Sexy, but I can't see a shalow DOF. |
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09/10/2008 04:40:01 AM |
| At fisrt sight the DOF seems not to be very shallow. On closer look one can see that the edge of the bed is OOF, but that doesn't add anything to the image. The shadow on her face is a bit unflattering. |
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