The image looks a little soft as if it was a good idea executed as a snapshot. Needs some adjustments to give it a little pop. I do see some potential in this, however. I'm afraid the title could use a little creativity as well. I do like the composition and subject.
Clever the way the two central eyes 'join', very well positioned and nice close crop. The lightings a bit dark for the image though, it would be far more striking if a bit brighter.