Challenge:7 Deadly Sins (Classic Editing) Camera:Olympus E-20 Location: LI, NY Date: Oct 13, 2002 Aperture: 4.0 ISO: 100 Shutter: 60 Date Uploaded: Oct 13, 2002
Yummm, but it's better without the camera shadow. Who-ever sliced the cake sure mangled the slice on the left. Good photo, sorry, got carried away with the service aspect of your desert. 7 Swash
Set up not good. Trash in top left corner. Napkin drooping in bottom on left and appears silver ware hanging off. Doily bending. Need to pay attention to details. Take good pictures but details make the difference between 5 and 8 04 9
Nice idea... However, the shadow at the bottom is distracting, and with the two forks and two spoons it looks like you are going to share... The pic might work better with the silverware napkin, and whatever it is at the upper left corner, out of the picture. That way the focus would be entirely on the tempting food. Nice job on the whipped cream. So often people wind up burning out the whites in a high contrast picture like this. 8
not a bad subject, but the composition seems like it needs work. Perhaps just shooting the cake would have been more effective.. the silverware especially seems to detract from the shot. 4