There's some motion blur (ideally I would have set the ISO to 200 or 400), and the crop isn't quite right, so I thought I'd experiment a bit more than usual. Here I selectively saturated/clarified parts of the image, used a Time Machine filter for the color, and added noise.
Very interesting! I actually love this type of photography. It shows motion and energy, and it fits the urban look of the scene. I really love the photo!
Not bad. If a hectic mood is what you're after it is a good attempt but in my view falls short. I don't see anything else that makes it a hurried situation. I like the blur and shake.