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07/11/2008 04:47:12 PM |
More than competent, especially since it was basic editing. I really like the off angle, it adds a lot of interest. I agree with whoever commented that the sky needs to be darker. A way to get this in basic is to darken the blues before doing the b&w conversion.
If it were me (take this with a grain of salt, my landscape abilities are caca), I would try two different things. First, I'd get down lower, closer to the water, then shoot up more to get more sky. I think that might be a more interesting angle. Second, I might try a long exposure, to make the water more silky smooth. That would require a ND filter or less light, maybe twilight. Or shoot very early in the morning when there's less wind to disturb the water. |
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07/11/2008 11:10:21 AM |
Very competent. Good, even. :) The composition is terrific (take THAT, Robert!).
Having fun with the wide angle lens? |
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07/11/2008 07:01:58 AM |
Like I would, sky darker must be.
Yes that was a failed attempt at Star Wars humor.
I think a dark sky would bring out that building and complement the dark water. |
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07/10/2008 12:14:25 PM |
Elegantly competent rendition of sophisticated boredom :-) I'd be happier with more sky and less foreground, the split is too much in the middle and the foreground isn't adding anything much. Now, if there was a model sailboat on the pond left fore or something :-)
It's a nice shot though, really :-) |
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07/09/2008 12:10:35 PM |
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07/09/2008 10:47:59 AM |
| Hey, I knew you would do better then mine, I must sit in your classroom more :) |
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07/09/2008 12:20:35 AM |
| Hey another not too bad of a score result :) I like all of the shots. The perspective and leading line on this is cool. Love the reflections, the dripping water in the fountain and the clouds. Very cool photo. |
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07/08/2008 08:46:38 AM |
| great perspective and good use of b&w. |
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