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07/22/2008 10:20:29 AMPost actions
This reminds me of my own attempt at a similar setup ... and we nearly got the same score :)
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07/09/2008 10:33:11 AMPost actions
Nice shot Josh. Actually, I think having her centered works very well.
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07/09/2008 06:06:33 AMPost actions
from me in Posthumous Ribbons
I love the lighting in this, works perfectly for me ... having a pretty model doesn't hurt either! The lines and patterns of the fence and walkway work really well for me and the dof is perfect. I also like the low level this is taken at and the position of the modelMessage edited by author 2008-07-09 06:07:35.
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Comments Made During the Challenge
07/06/2008 12:16:16 PMPost actions
I would like to have seen her closer and without so much of the background.
07/05/2008 02:59:01 PMPost actions
very pretty girl in a very pretty and cute dress, but the shadow beneath her is kinda distracting, but not really so i'll just shutup now
07/04/2008 06:13:57 AMPost actions
I like the lighting, but the shadow cast is a little distracting...also, composition could have been more creative...very pretty model amber is...6
07/02/2008 09:06:22 PMPost actions
I like the setting and her pose.
07/02/2008 06:23:33 PMPost actions
not sure the lighting on the model works
07/02/2008 08:48:35 AMPost actions
nice use of the flash, but I see shadows and she is too close to the center. Try avoind those next time.
07/01/2008 04:11:19 PMPost actions
Good composition, but the lighting on her is a bit "much." Not necessarily harsh, but everything around her is "muted" and if it weren't for the shadow, it would almost look like she wasn't really there.
07/01/2008 11:17:18 AMPost actions
Nice angle and exposure is lovely with the fill light making her stand out. Good work.
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07/01/2008 10:31:25 AMPost actions
Nice work...but y our lighting has fallen short...maybe a backlight would have helped here as well.