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AMBER
AMBER
jwillerton


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Free Study 2008-06 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D
Lens: Canon EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS USM
Location: Belle Isle, Detroit Michigan
Date: Jun 11, 2008
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/100
Galleries: Fashion, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Jun 29, 2008

Model: Amber

I really enjoyed working with Amber and I think we were able to come up with some great images.

As far as score prediction...I always get the shaft on here...so I'll set my sights low...5.8.

Statistics
Place: 217 out of 473
Avg (all users): 5.7815
Avg (commenters): 5.5000
Avg (participants): 5.6518
Avg (non-participants): 6.1538
Views since voting: 1646
Views during voting: 309
Votes: 151
Comments: 12
Favorites: 2 (view)


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AuthorThread
07/22/2008 10:20:29 AM
This reminds me of my own attempt at a similar setup ... and we nearly got the same score :)

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07/09/2008 10:33:11 AM
Nice shot Josh. Actually, I think having her centered works very well.
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07/09/2008 06:06:33 AM
from me in Posthumous Ribbons

I love the lighting in this, works perfectly for me ... having a pretty model doesn't hurt either! The lines and patterns of the fence and walkway work really well for me and the dof is perfect. I also like the low level this is taken at and the position of the model

Message edited by author 2008-07-09 06:07:35.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/06/2008 12:16:16 PM
I would like to have seen her closer and without so much of the background.
07/05/2008 02:59:01 PM
very pretty girl in a very pretty and cute dress, but the shadow beneath her is kinda distracting, but not really so i'll just shutup now
07/04/2008 06:13:57 AM
I like the lighting, but the shadow cast is a little distracting...also, composition could have been more creative...very pretty model amber is...6
07/02/2008 09:06:22 PM
I like the setting and her pose.
07/02/2008 06:23:33 PM
not sure the lighting on the model works
07/02/2008 08:48:35 AM
nice use of the flash, but I see shadows and she is too close to the center. Try avoind those next time.
07/01/2008 04:11:19 PM
Good composition, but the lighting on her is a bit "much." Not necessarily harsh, but everything around her is "muted" and if it weren't for the shadow, it would almost look like she wasn't really there.
07/01/2008 11:17:18 AM
Nice angle and exposure is lovely with the fill light making her stand out. Good work.
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07/01/2008 10:31:25 AM
Nice work...but y our lighting has fallen short...maybe a backlight would have helped here as well.


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