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Urban Fisherman's Tranquility
Urban Fisherman's Tranquility
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: A Single Line (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Lens: Canon EF 100mm f/2.8 USM Macro
Location: Hull, UK
Date: Jun 19, 2008
Aperture: F5.6
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/750
Galleries: Black and White, Rural
Date Uploaded: Jun 20, 2008

Taken on local Lake in Hull, UK. Bright sunshine from the left onto the bank - taken around 6:30pm.

Cropped
Spot edit some dust
Neat Image- low level x2
Higlights and Shadows
Brightness and contrast
Convert to grayscale then tritone
USM
Levels
Curves
USM
Resize

Statistics
Place: 104 out of 142
Avg (all users): 5.1188
Avg (commenters): 5.3333
Avg (participants): 5.1077
Avg (non-participants): 5.1263
Views since voting: 658
Views during voting: 276
Votes: 160
Comments: 5
Favorites: 0


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07/05/2008 12:03:50 PM
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Compositionally, there is a good balance between the grass and the water. The line, however, looks a bit odd, contextually. My first thought, based on the title, was that it was a fishing pole, but it doesn't look like a fishing pole. It just looks like a stick going across the frame. It may have been helpful if you could have gotten wider and included the tip of the pole -- it would have given a definite starting/stopping point for the line, and given the shot some more context.

Technically, I like the selective focus used. The bw and contrast level is also done very well.

Overall, a nicely done shot. It meets the challenge, but there isn't as much context, I think, to really connect with the voters.

Best to you in future challenges.
Karma
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/24/2008 11:34:15 PM
Nice use of mono.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/23/2008 09:09:19 PM
Wonderful! I really love the quirkyness of this and the B&W conversion is stella!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/23/2008 02:57:12 PM
Great idea.. I think I'd like this better in color
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06/23/2008 04:44:11 AM
This is so random it makes me smile, I really like the tones
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