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A Line Divided
A Line Divided
zackdezon


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: A Single Line (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Olympus E-300 EVOLT
Lens: Olympus 14-42mm f.3.5-5.6 ED Zuiko Digital Zoom
Location: The Getty Villa, Malibu
Date: Jun 18, 2008
Aperture: f/5.6
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/250
Galleries: Architecture
Date Uploaded: Jun 18, 2008

Lessee...

Desaturate in RAW,
Curves,
Highlights/Shadows
USM
Sepia
Crop
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Kinda happy with this one. I hope the DNMC police don't hassle me over the fact that the line is broken up..

Statistics
Place: 58 out of 142
Avg (all users): 5.7256
Avg (commenters): 5.6667
Avg (participants): 5.4615
Avg (non-participants): 5.8990
Views since voting: 816
Views during voting: 275
Votes: 164
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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07/04/2008 09:43:50 AM
Critique Club Review:

Color Saturation and Hue: Colors are not realistic, but do work very well with this composition. Nice touch...

Brightness and contrast: Very well done. The sides of a couple of steps in the upper third of the picture are approaching burnout, but they are not distracting and do not really harm the image.

Focus and depth of field: Excellent Sharpness and detail are held throughout the image, which is what is needed in this type of compostition. I do agree however, with a previous comment that the image may have been a little over processed. The image looks over sharpened in a few areas.

Although the line is broken, I don't think it really hurt you. It takes a bit of sitting with the image to notice it. Even then the shadows carry through, which is why it isn't more noticeable, and not harming the image.

I like the sepia effect. It helps warm the image, and it would have been a colder harsher image had you left it natural.

You made a well deserved upper half of the class, but why did this image not score higher? (Personally I really like this image and could see it in a gallery or office.) I like the tone of the colors, I like the roughness of the back of the steps as a counter point to the soothness of the rest of the image. I like the nice clean lines.

Though not noted in the comments below, you may have recieved a bit lower vote because the litteralists will see more than one line. Which can happen all too often.

Nice work!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/28/2008 08:24:51 PM
This has rhythm. Great lighting too, and a good idea for the challenge. I like the crop.
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06/24/2008 11:55:45 PM
Nice color on this one, good work.
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06/23/2008 02:55:14 PM
nice shot
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06/23/2008 10:28:25 AM
Wonderful composition. I love the tones. The shadows are not too distracting.
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06/23/2008 10:17:35 AM
Neat idea and title. Colors are a little flat and the "divide" gets a little lost in it.
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06/23/2008 06:11:26 AM
this pic looks good, a little over sharpening, not sure if you were trying to bring out more of a grunge look or just more clarity. good job
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