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06/30/2008 12:37:14 PM |
Watch for how shadows are cast, as here with the shadow from her arm across her shirt. Since this appears to be a posed shot, you should have ironed her shirt, and there even appears to be a stain on her shirt.
Overall, this could be improved most by improving your lighting. |
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06/30/2008 12:16:36 AM |
| the lighting hurts the shot /5 |
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06/27/2008 11:30:36 PM |
| The lighting is uninteresting. I would have done this in black and white or composed it using natural light or something more dramatic. |
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06/27/2008 10:12:32 PM |
| Nice shot... but I am a bit distracted by the shadow on her right shoulder. |
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06/27/2008 12:01:19 PM |
| Nice composition. Good pose. IMHO, the lighting could have been a little softer to avoid the harsh shadows. Also, seems a little under-exposed and lacking contrast. Only these aspects make this image weaker. |
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06/25/2008 09:47:47 AM |
| Hmm, could use just a bit more light, IMHO |
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06/25/2008 06:51:05 AM |
| Nice composition and concept. Lighting is a bit dark. |
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06/25/2008 01:54:21 AM |
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