Excellent composition. I'd have tweaked the shadows and highlights a bit and help define the faces as the dark complexions get lost in the toning. Otherwise, good shot and good luck!
Well done to capture them in the same pose, (but then they always walk like that!) I like the way that the soldier on the right has his bayonet pointing to the corner of the frame. With this being an advanced editing challenge I would have been tempted to clone out the spare set of legs on the left hand soldier and tidy up the dirt(?) off the floor in front of them
That is not fair! One guy has to stand on one leg, while the other one has still got three on the ground...;)
Cute shoes, and so very practical for a soldier. Nice sepia.