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The Constant Shaper
The Constant Shaper
ikopanas


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Challenge: Free Study 2008-05 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S9100/9600
Location: Greece
Date: May 19, 2008
Galleries: Portraiture, Traditional Art
Date Uploaded: May 19, 2008

 Carnival Lab, Patras Greece.
Noise reduction, sharpening, contrast and spots.
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Revised with some blur on the right lower corner which may be a mistake! :)

Statistics
Place: 433 out of 481
Avg (all users): 4.7450
Avg (commenters): 5.7500
Avg (participants): 4.6514
Avg (non-participants): 5.0000
Views since voting: 766
Views during voting: 232
Votes: 149
Comments: 7
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 06/15/2008 10:03:41 PM
To be honest the first thing I notice is the lighting, it's lacking a punch that would add a lot. Another thing I noticed is that my eye doesn't know where to go, is the main subject the thing he is making or is it him? One thing that would be cool on this would be to have a shallower DOF, so that only the guy is in focus, to add more emphasis to him being the main subject. Another thing would be to come from a different angle, so that you can see more of the shaper. I like the environmental portrait that it is, as noted by Erica.
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 06/11/2008 02:46:46 PM
I would have liked to see the man a little more in focus. Its a great environmental portrait, but I think that the emphasis needs to be on the man, and it also seems like there is a little blur motion in his hand.

If you had a speed light (that you can detach) you could have lit the man from the side (behind the figure he is working on) for a more dramatic effect.

I think the composition is good because the shape of the figure leads right to the man so it draws your eye in.

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 06/09/2008 11:28:16 AM
under 5?? Oy
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/07/2008 02:17:04 PM
Open wide - that should have been the title.
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 06/04/2008 08:54:26 PM
very good environmental portrait
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 06/02/2008 12:49:13 PM
great environmental portrait
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 06/01/2008 09:09:16 AM
quite out of focus
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