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Challenge: Healthy Food (Basic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSLR-A100
Lens: Sony DT 18-70mm f/3.5-5.6 Aspherical ED Zoom Lens for Sony Alpha
Location: Sara's parents' kitchen
Date: Apr 26, 2008
Aperture: F14.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/80 secs
Galleries: Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Apr 29, 2008

 Not very happy with this, but couldn't not enter something given that we're watching our calories at the moment in the Soulman household.

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Place: 59 out of 109
Avg (all users): 5.2243
Avg (commenters): 5.4615
Avg (participants): 5.0930
Avg (non-participants): 5.2500
Views since voting: 846
Views during voting: 384
Votes: 263
Comments: 16
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 05/13/2008 02:34:15 PM
Critique Club Greetings

Hi, I think that this is a good idea but with a very bad realization. The most important problem that I see (always as my personal opinion) is the light. too much on the fruits and too much strong. the colours aren't very good, not natural but this is a consequence of the light.
from compositional point of view is good.

Gennaro

P.S. if you have something to ask me please send me a personal message.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/06/2008 11:59:35 PM
Whetting the appetite scale: 6
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 05/06/2008 05:26:24 PM
Nice choice of complementary colours...and I like your perspective.
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 05/04/2008 08:28:19 AM
very colorful and inviting
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 05/02/2008 12:43:51 AM
Nice composition, but the light is kind of harsh
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 05/01/2008 09:07:40 PM
composition is very nice, but the lighting has a "neon" feel to it
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 05/01/2008 07:52:12 PM
seems a bit overexposed to me. No doubt it's healthy though. Also seems like the berries are obscured too much by the dishes. I like the shallow dof and the dishes in the background. Would also like to have seen them arranged in a row diagonally.
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 05/01/2008 12:05:14 PM
with such colurful fruit one jar on a white or black background would work better.
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 05/01/2008 09:40:44 AM
It's very colorful
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 04/30/2008 05:24:08 PM
Not bad. Cool colors.
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 04/30/2008 04:03:22 PM
There is something inherently unhealthy about the yellow tint in the ramekins
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 04/30/2008 03:08:49 PM
color on the berries seems washed out, the yellow is distracting. whatever lighting you used just didnt give your subjects justice
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 04/30/2008 01:58:11 PM
I love the combinations of red and violet. :) xxx.
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 04/30/2008 01:35:47 PM
I like the subject/food choice overall. The yellow tint of the bg is killing this for me. The clear dishes with a white (heck, I'd even try black just to see) bg might be more appealing. All JMO of course. :-) Good luck in the challenge.
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 04/30/2008 08:16:30 AM
good focus and composition. had filled the cups a bit higher, though. overall a bit bright
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 04/30/2008 02:11:14 AM
Beautiful --- but colors look surreal.
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