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04/24/2008 09:53:04 PM |
Hello :)
In this picture, I feel the red wall in front over-powers the stair pattern. My eyes are constantly drawn towards the left top of the frame which doesn't have much to add to the pic. Also a lot of variation of light from left to right which also hinders focussing on the lines which the photograph is about. |
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04/02/2008 03:25:59 AM |
| The overexposure was perfect for this in my opinion. Please be careful about taking advice/incorporating comments if by doing so it changes what you wanted to do with the picture. If you want to score better here, then by all means you should have properly exposed this. But I don't think it would have worked nearly as well as it did. Welcome to DPC and I look forward to seeing more of your work! |
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04/02/2008 02:05:10 AM |
a bummer ... because the overexposure was deliberate with the intent of accentuating the patterns. otherwise, i thought the texture of the walls would interfere with the patterns that were clearly visible.
however, this was my first entry and a great learning experience. thank you for taking the time to post comments! |
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04/01/2008 07:29:18 PM |
| I'd prefer to see less saturation. |
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04/01/2008 01:43:31 PM |
| Wow. Really Wow. At first, I saw overexposed photo and I was thinking about a 4-5 range, but for some reason I just think it is really beautiful. |
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04/01/2008 10:49:16 AM |
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03/31/2008 10:19:55 AM |
| When I first looked at the photo at the beginning of the week I was thinking that it was too bright which took out some of the pattern. But the more I look at it the more I see that the sun gives a second kind of pattern which is intreguiging and would have not noticed that at first glance myself. Now that I see it clearly I can now vote it higher than what I previously voted. Well done and fantastic vision for this challange. |
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03/31/2008 09:22:30 AM |
| the lines in this photo define the positive characteristics of this image. |
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03/31/2008 04:59:07 AM |
| could have been a great image, but it´s too burned out for my taste |
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03/30/2008 02:51:52 PM |
| Good shot i like the tiles they add good contrast |
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03/30/2008 06:13:25 AM |
| i like this. maybe try it again with less sunlight. |
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03/30/2008 01:14:21 AM |
| The high key effect of this seems to lose some detail in the patterns, for me at least. |
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03/29/2008 07:33:58 PM |
| Would have liked a less high key approach. otherwise I feel this image with right amount of post processing to bring out more details can be a high scorer. 6 |
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03/29/2008 02:40:02 PM |
| Wonderfully aligned. Excellent entry for the challenge and an all around fine shot on its own. |
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03/28/2008 10:26:32 PM |
| good idea but far too much glare from the white. |
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03/28/2008 06:27:56 AM |
| Lots of detail washed-out. I see you want lots of contrast for the concept, but I keep looking for the lost lines. |
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03/28/2008 03:58:57 AM |
| very interesting view, nice color contrast. too bad all the lights are blown |
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03/27/2008 08:34:14 PM |
| I like what you tried to capture here. I don't care for the washed out highlights, though that may have been intentional on your part. |
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03/27/2008 04:14:00 PM |
| While I am not a fan of overprocessing, this one actually works -7 |
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03/27/2008 09:48:00 AM |
| a good geometric pattern, but it is far too bright for my taste. |
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03/27/2008 12:06:31 AM |
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03/26/2008 10:28:34 PM |
| I guess it was supposed to be so white -- not really to my taste. |
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03/26/2008 03:44:16 PM |
| Way cool. From across the room, it almost looked 3D. |
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03/26/2008 01:05:55 PM |
| I may have to come back to this one... I can't decide if I like the blown out white or not... which, I guess is better than definitely not liking it right away... hmmmm.... |
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03/26/2008 12:35:48 PM |
| It's overexposed, it's tilted and chaotic, but I love it. |
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