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03/31/2008 08:49:09 PM |
| I like the idea of the composition but a little too much of the picture is blurry. |
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03/31/2008 04:20:45 PM |
| Nice idea, but I feel you needed a slightly larger depth of field as you don't seem to have anything sharply in focus |
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03/29/2008 08:24:04 AM |
| Good idea, but I think the shot would be better if the aperture was reduced allowing a greater depth of field. Also the focus should be done on the beginning of the fretboard, not in the middle. |
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03/29/2008 08:18:22 AM |
| Unfortunately at your point of focus, the focus is still too soft. Image needs to have more DOF & crisper focus to have more impact. Overall composition is good. |
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03/28/2008 11:33:45 AM |
| The colors on this one are fantastic. I love how it looks. The focal point on this image is really in the perfect spot. |
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03/28/2008 12:06:06 AM |
| I don't know if the narrow DOF works well here. It is so narrow that you have to look twice to see if anything is in focus. I do like the concept. The colors are engaging and the lighting looks pretty good. The body of the guitar looks to be pretty well centered, but the fret bar is not - I think that takes away from the image a little. |
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03/27/2008 04:43:54 PM |
| For my taste, the depth of field is too shallow here. A nice take nonetheless. -6 |
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03/27/2008 04:40:25 PM |
| I think your DOF may be too shallow in a pattern challenge. |
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03/27/2008 03:10:11 PM |
| I like the idea and the Pov. However, the focus area seems a bit soft. |
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03/27/2008 12:17:10 PM |
| I bit of a stretch for me, but I see what you are doing. Interesting use of dof to bring the eyes to the center of the neck. This is a choice I haven't seen used much, not sure if others are going to appreciate it. Oh, back to the challenge. If you could have taken this shot and showed only the neck, I would be more inclined to accept, without question, how this fits the challenge. |
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03/26/2008 10:31:28 PM |
| The tiny DOF was distracting to me. I'll give an "A" for effort, but I have mixed feeling on the pattern. It does not seem to stand out as well as many of the others. |
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03/26/2008 12:25:35 PM |
| If only you could have gotten more of the fret board to make it more like a pathway instead of just a section of a path. |
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03/26/2008 11:06:57 AM |
| dof too narrow but a good try at bokeh |
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03/26/2008 10:13:23 AM |
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03/26/2008 09:47:48 AM |
| The dof is pretty bad in this. You should try to get everything in focus and this could be a really nice shot. Very nice attempt |
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