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03/28/2004 09:26:52 PM |
| The darkness of the building doesn't do it justice. For an architectural magazine I would expect the shot to highlight & emphasize the beauty of the building. In this shot I'm more drawn to the angles of the steps |
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03/26/2004 11:08:18 PM |
| Good subject & composition. Better weather would be the key thing to improve here. Outside of that, the best you can do is burn the sky & snow and dodge the building in Photoshop to bring out the details |
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03/25/2004 05:49:21 PM |
| Converging verticals are a problem here, fortunately this can now be corrected with the new rules as far as I'm aware. The overal shot is almost pretty good, but making all the elements of the building parallel would make it much more professional. Snow is tricky to expose for, and the building is underexposed. IMO the picture would be much better without the road in the foreground. I know that you can use the empty sky to place text and such into for your magazine cover, but as a photo I would have liked some texture in there, for example some clouds. I love the jagged path in this composition. |
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03/23/2004 09:09:07 PM |
| Too dark. The importance of an architectural magazine is the architecture. Too much foreground. Getting closer to the building and showing more detail would help. There is a little bit of converging vertical lines. |
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03/23/2004 01:07:03 PM |
| Bad light on the building. We can blame it on the snow :( I think this could be better subject in more dark |
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03/23/2004 11:07:40 AM |
| The contrast seems to drowned some of the detail. |
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03/23/2004 12:08:12 AM |
| a difficult subject to meter on.... |
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03/23/2004 12:02:34 AM |
| maybe it's an optical illusion but this looks a bit lobsided. |
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03/22/2004 07:55:20 PM |
| I think this shot would have benefitted from a tighter crop on the building (to elimiinate the street and patch of thawed ground) and rotating it a little to the right so the tower is straight up. It feels off-balance in this composition. |
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03/22/2004 06:18:30 PM |
| wish I could see the detail in the church |
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03/22/2004 05:36:20 PM |
| Ouch! I though it's two images... The scene is super but the castle is little too dark. |
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03/22/2004 05:36:18 PM |
| I would have liked to see more detail on the building, just a bit too dark |
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03/22/2004 11:06:39 AM |
| Excellent shot but it looks like its kinda leaning to the left. |
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03/22/2004 08:09:36 AM |
| Great idea, but seems a touch underexposed... I'm left wanting to see more details of the incredible building. |
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03/22/2004 07:24:35 AM |
| Nice idea, but the exposure isn't "rich" enought looking for most magazines I've seen. Needs more detail. |
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03/22/2004 07:00:26 AM |
| interesting but i feel the building itself is too dark and loses the details of the architecture. |
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