The line "you can't seem to keep away from the edge" from "Sweet Danger" by Angel Witch.
I seem to remember the first line being "On a fifteen-storey block, you can't seem to keep away from the edge", although all the searches I did to confirm my memory gave the line as being "On the fifth storey block...". I remain convinced that I'm right, so I'm only quoting the second half of the line.
just dont jump if it is the 15th storey, or even the 5th, for that matter!! (although certainly the 15th floor would be a lot more dramatic- & your editing and the imagery sums that up nicely!! to be honest, I don't get the "storey block" thing anyway...
This scares me just looking at it and I'm not scared of heights!! Excellent PoV - also pretty cool that the sky was washed out for your head to stand out against (or if you did it, I can't tell..that's either mist/fog or shonky masking :))
you look so relaxed,id be a bundle of nerves,that being said,"WHAT A GREAT SHOT!" my favorite of your bunch thus far! going to search for "Angel Witch"...