I like the light coming through the petals, IMO more room at the bottom as not to cut the petals would have worked better and a lower f/stop to blur the background more :)
The lighting on the left side of the flower causes your eye to look there first. The flowering being sharply in focus is strong, and the background adds nicely as they are the same plants.
Its a nice flower picture. Normally I'd suggest that you crop it differently so that the flower is not in the dead center, but with the balance them, it is fine. I would prefer it without the background flower on the lower right; it draws my attention away from the central flower.