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02/19/2008 01:45:59 PM |
nice composition - a little dark overall, though. |
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02/18/2008 10:49:29 PM |
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02/18/2008 09:22:33 PM |
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02/18/2008 03:33:02 PM |
Almost nailed it with this still life. Contrast is a bit dull though. Some adjustments to bring out the texture and colors would have improved this. Some variation on the lighting as well, perhaps, but I'm still experimenting with lighting myself. I'm not any expert in that area. |
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02/16/2008 03:37:28 AM |
Nice shot. I like the lighting and the composition. I think it's a bit dark overall though, causing the jam to blend in with the background. For my taste, the dof is a bit short as well. |
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02/14/2008 09:29:58 PM |
Nice composition! I can never slice bread properly. I'd have to photograph crumbs! *grin* |
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02/13/2008 05:58:22 PM |
Yum... maybe increasing the dof to get the leading edge of the bread in focus too would have helped this |
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02/13/2008 09:48:56 AM |
my first impressions: nice and warm colors; the butter in taking away from the bread (less is more); a bit more light bounced tothe bottom to separate the slices; the same for the jar (a slight reflection of light would separate the jar from the background). good composition. |
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