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Challenge: Bread (Basic Editing)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Nikon D80
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.8D
Location: University Park, Texas
Date: Feb 10, 2008
Aperture: f 3.5
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/1000
Galleries: Still Life, Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Feb 10, 2008

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I really wrestled with some harsh lighting on this. I wanted to use a diffuser but found I had left it at home. I wish I had composed the shot with the people in the background in a place other than right over the wine bottle. I realize very little of the shot is composed of "Bread" but I am hoping it's enough.

Statistics
Place: 42 out of 167
Avg (all users): 5.6376
Avg (commenters): 5.9091
Avg (participants): 5.3607
Avg (non-participants): 5.7381
Views since voting: 1252
Views during voting: 343
Votes: 229
Comments: 13
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/19/2008 10:22:39 PM
Nice set up, but the people in the background are a littel distracting.
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 02/18/2008 10:44:21 PM
If I could've seen the people in the background all the way I would've given this a 10. 9
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 02/18/2008 01:33:25 AM
What I like about this one is that the arrangment of the items is very professional looking. The out-of-focus people in the background make the image look almost like an ad (which is a good thing IMO) but I think it would be more balanced if either the people or the wine bottle was moved to the other side. The flash of white in the b/g is distracting as well. Definitely has potential though! Strong 7 from me.
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 02/17/2008 04:48:57 PM
*salivates* Blue cheese on fresh bread.... Great set up. Background colour feels slightly washed out, but nonetheless a lovely shot.
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 02/15/2008 10:56:40 PM
Nice, but the background is somewhat distracting.
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 02/14/2008 09:49:49 PM
Nice scene.....where the heck do you live because I'm in 4' of snow here!
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 02/14/2008 09:47:25 PM
good thought, but the background kind of kills it. the lighting on the food and wine is very nice though.
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 02/14/2008 01:33:43 PM
I really like this photo. The outdoor picnic scene add originality. The subjects in your background look a bit artifacty (The 'glow' around the people), but it's still excellent.
7.
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 02/14/2008 11:07:54 AM
lunch is served, nicely done, would have liked to have not seen you in teh reflection of hte bottle. But I love the shiney surface of the bread against the grain of the wheat bread . Actually you shot has made me hungry, which is a great comliment for the shot
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 02/14/2008 12:38:02 AM
The highlight at the top bothers me
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 02/13/2008 09:44:46 PM
Distracting background.
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 02/13/2008 09:24:58 PM
I like how you arranged this still life outside rather than in front of a drab backdrop. The people might have been better positioned; they look odd perched on top of the wine bottle.
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 02/13/2008 06:22:27 PM
Yummy... a little washed out though?
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