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02/29/2008 05:54:12 AM |
Really well-lit and detailed. The shadow from the peak of the cap adds some depth yet doesn't overpower in any way. |
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02/09/2008 05:28:56 AM |
I like this one. Like it a lot. |
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02/07/2008 09:06:55 AM |
i like this one,except your right arm seems amputated (i guess i should say "too close to the body") other than that this is well done. |
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02/06/2008 11:04:22 PM |
You look very different with a hat on. Nice job with the lighting. You didn't lose the black hat in the black background. |
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02/06/2008 03:29:59 PM |
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02/06/2008 10:04:44 AM |
You look great. I would try to tone down the red on your face a little. I like you in uniform! My husband is retired USAF- I love that pickle suit! |
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02/06/2008 12:12:44 AM |
Nothing too much to be said about the light, except maybe the demonic catchlights taking out the pupils and a slightly flat look, though it could be argued this is a fine example of a kind of "butterfly" lighting, but that's usually more suited to pretty and delicate faces which, I'm sorry to tell you, you ain't got. ;-) I think technically the lighting is good, particularly considering you're wearing a visor over your eyes and they're well lit. You're not separated from the background at all, which is a big minus for me. In my view some context in the form of texture and shadows or shaped light back there is needed. The pose is great. |
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02/05/2008 11:41:01 PM |
Well lit. Nice pose with the body angled away from the camera. Well done. |
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02/05/2008 11:35:18 PM |
great light, but maybe composing it differently? ROT maybe? But its a good shot non-the-less. |
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02/05/2008 09:35:32 PM |
Work on them creases and clean that hat:) Nice work Mike. Focus on your eyes could be better. The lighting is good. Have fun with your exercise. Sorry, still don't miss it. |
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02/05/2008 09:32:40 PM |
Classic portrait, very well lit. |
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02/05/2008 08:20:22 PM |
Your left eye is a little shadowed, but minor detail IMO... your light is not flat, and that is a good thing... I still would like to see a lil light on the bg, just to show that you aren't floating in the abyss... You might find this interesting. Apologies if you have seen it before :) |
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02/05/2008 08:18:04 PM |
Getting your way is what its all about L()L. Nice clean portrait and balance of shadows/light. It can sometimes be very difficult when there is a brim covering the eyes. Nice work. |
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