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New for 1939! The Fabulous Falcon Model 4!
New for 1939! The Fabulous Falcon Model 4!
NikonJeb


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Advertisement III (Basic Editing)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Nikon D70s
Lens: Tamron AF 28-300mm f/3.5-6.3 XR Di LD Aspherical IF for Nikon
Location: Harrisburg, Pa
Date: Feb 2, 2008
Aperture: F/29
ISO: 200
Shutter: 25 Seconds
Date Uploaded: Feb 3, 2008

Not too much, really, light crop, desaturate, lighten, convert from RAW, resize, save for web, submit

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Place: 80 out of 157
Avg (all users): 5.3448
Avg (commenters): 6.1429
Avg (participants): 5.1930
Avg (non-participants): 5.3943
Views since voting: 1014
Views during voting: 354
Votes: 232
Comments: 7
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02/11/2008 03:00:30 AM
fabulous!
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02/10/2008 10:53:32 AM
I have a V16. Wow. This is nice. Nice presentation for photography.
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02/08/2008 07:36:31 PM
very nice. what about a very tight shot of just 1/2 the lense and the name Falcon? might be nice too?
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02/08/2008 07:09:21 PM
Transition between the table/floor and your background is a little too abrupt (IMO). To make the transition line softer, move the subject further away from the background and shoot more wide open to decrease the DOF.
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02/07/2008 07:23:32 PM
Very nicely exposed shot - nice trade-offs between the dark on teh bellows & ring around lens with the start white on the box. Your title works against you "new" and the condition of the box don't match. You'll probably get complaints about the "harsh shadows"...
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02/07/2008 02:42:02 PM
Nice product presentation. I'm sure what you're selling. Lighting is good and B&W works really well. I'd use a different,less centered, comp to allow for text in the ad.
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02/06/2008 09:42:50 AM
haha nice
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