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01/27/2008 03:47:51 PM |
| this would be a lot better with the bottom of the window level with the photograph, and perhaps a bit more contrast. not sure what the black and white treatment is for, as i feel that the multicolored jackets of the children would make for a far more interesting foreground. |
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01/26/2008 02:26:22 PM |
| Nice candid capture. You almost want to semi-pose this (i.e. have one child not interested (using thirds) with their back to the window looking bored just to add some contrast and draw my focus to a central point somewhere in the row of kids. Focus is nice and crisp. Good Luck. 6. |
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01/24/2008 07:37:40 PM |
| Cute moment, especially the ones making handprints on the windows. |
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01/24/2008 08:43:20 AM |
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01/23/2008 09:50:00 AM |
| oh I loved field trips when I was a kid ... I'm trying to figure out where this is ... |
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01/21/2008 09:13:50 PM |
| cute! it appears a little crooked though |
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01/21/2008 12:15:04 PM |
| This is a cool photo, with everyone looking out the window. I think it just needs a bit more contrast or curves, and I also think it would have more impact if the photo were straightened. |
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01/21/2008 11:38:45 AM |
| Nice tones and B&W conversion. |
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01/21/2008 12:51:01 AM |
| While kinda cute I don't think it is quite right. the shadows on the right are nice and would be interesting if they ran throughout. color might help but then again with so many people it might make it worse. in the end it is a nice capture but not quite awsoeme. 6 |
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