I get the comments about the shadow and highlights, but I gotta say that none of that mattered to me when I saw this photo. It just grabbed my attention and I really like it!
The shadow on your body is problematic for me, and the highlights on your hand are little hot, which doesn't work well in this photograph. Otherwise, the pose is neat and the depth of field good.
The pose in this one makes it more clear that the pointing finger is the subject and the out of focus face is not as much of a problem as with the other one.